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Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Incomplete



It’s the way you walk, how you smell, the way keep yourself looking good, the stimulating conversation you give, the laughs we share…..that keep you on my mind, even though we are distant

The day I realized I was in love with you

This succeeded you already having fallen in and out for me

Now I wander around from woman to woman, hoping to recapture what we had

Searching for my missing piece so that I can once again become whole

Feeling like the puzzle of me is about to crumble, foundation shaky, will I make it?  Maybe

Thinking of you being someone else’s wife is enough to drive me to brink of taking my own life

How I can live in the world without sunshine?

Man wasn’t mean to be alone that’s why God gave Adam his queen in Eve

Dreaming of being at church, wedding bells ringing, doves flying, singing and when I lift the veil I see it’s not you and it seems like the cruel joke a nightmare is known to play

Don’t you understand? We were made for each other…..my son you will be the mother and your child I will be the father

Will you ever come back and put me back together?  Place me on a sturdy and secure area of the wall…..only if I know you will be there to catch is when I again fall



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1 comment:

PhoenixStar said...

First of all this is simply beautiful...I did mist up...of course I have an opinion... :-)

it is so very important to always illustrate how we feel about one another when it comes to matters of the heart...cause assumption always takes things for granted...though disagreement arise in the relationship, it would never be enough to just walk away...

because of how I love...when I said I'll love you for life (a fancy way of saying we'll be married)...I mean just that...the thing about the person that you know you are to be with forever is hat u are so very willing to work thru every nuiance...brave thru every disagreement...share every tear...and enjoy every smile...even if that means that you'll have to say the same things at times..overly explain yourself...and just really be silent to reflect...

marriage is about two people who are not perfect constantly perfecting the way that they respond to each other...from my perspective, if I didn't believe that I could not love you inspite of what ever may arise...I would have never said it..nor I would not believe so very deeply in this institution...honestly marriages start way before the ceremony, ring, and honeymoon...

as u state in your piece it's about catching that person continually and putting the pieces when they don't do things exactly as you would...and when that happens, when u express urself you don't love them any less...you love them enough to tell them when u hurt...vulnerability is a deep emotion almost as deep as love...admitting fault is just as penetrating...it is the foundation needed for any relationship...it sets the tone...hmmm, a foundation is being laid even though its not explicitly stated...amazing

I will always be your biggest fan...you always hit the mark...have a great day!